Edited by Max H Schwartz on 2/9/2025, 7:05 am
It needs some work, but it's a good start.
I haven't made any great attempt at getting anything done with it.
I see it as being something like the movie, "They All Laughed."
One of my favorites, largely due to my being a fan of Audrey Hepburn and Ben Gazzara.
You can watch the movie here:
Using the information in the uploaded document Write a story using the “SaveThe Cat” story model about what happens when there is a great folk music celebration at Chicago’s Old Town School of Music and Noel Paul Stookey, of Peter, Paul and Mary fame and Bob Flick, a founding member of The Brothers Four have been invited to lecture for a week prior to a big show on Saturday night, and Stookey and his wife Betty, and Flick and his wife, Lonnie Anderson, of WKRP Cincinnati fame happen to meet at O’hare at the luggage claim, and they see someone take Stooky’s prize Martin 00-18 G guitar that he has borrowed from The Metropolitan Museum to play for this special occasion and all four of them go after the thief and after several adventurous days where they visit well known places in Chicago, the guitar is finally recovered and is played by Stookey at the show where he signs a song about this adventure that he has written that I want you to write.
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Here's the story draft using the "Save the Cat" story model:
Title: The Stolen Song
Opening Image:
The bustling arrival area of O'Hare International Airport is alive with travelers. Among the chaos, Noel Paul Stookey, carrying a carefully packed Martin 00-18G guitar case, spots Bob Flick. Their reunion is warm, filled with nostalgic chatter. Accompanying them are their wives, Betty and Lonnie Anderson, enjoying the lively camaraderie. Excitement brews for the week ahead at Chicago’s Old Town School of Folk Music. But a shadow falls when Stookey’s prized guitar case suddenly vanishes from the luggage carousel.
Theme Stated:
Music connects us across generations, but it’s the journey—and the people we share it with—that compose life’s greatest melodies.
Set-Up:
The guitar, borrowed from The Metropolitan Museum for the celebration, holds deep historical significance—it was central to the early recordings of Peter, Paul, and Mary. Losing it would be a catastrophe, not just for the show but for Stookey personally. The group decides to pursue the thief, pooling their wits and connections to recover the irreplaceable instrument.
Catalyst:
Bob notices a suspicious figure slipping away with the guitar case. Stookey shouts, setting off a chase through the airport. The thief escapes in a cab, leaving the group with a license plate and a determination to track him down.
Debate:
Should they involve the police or handle it themselves? Betty and Lonnie argue for caution, while Noel and Bob insist on direct action. They decide to embark on their own investigation, using Chicago’s folk music community and their networks to uncover clues.
Break into Two (Act Two):
The foursome begins their adventure in Chicago, following leads to iconic locations: a smoky blues bar, Millennium Park, and the bustling Navy Pier. Each stop brings them closer to the thief, unveiling his motives—a desperate musician, disillusioned by the industry, wanting to reclaim the magic of folk music.
B Story:
As the group works together, their bonds deepen. Lonnie shares her memories of folk music’s golden age, while Betty reminds them all of the simple joy that brought them into music. Their shared history becomes a source of strength.
Fun and Games:
Hilarity ensues as they navigate Chicago’s quirks. Bob disguises himself as a street performer to get insider information. Lonnie charms a bar crowd to gather leads. Betty cleverly negotiates with a pawnshop owner for a clue. Each moment blends humor, nostalgia, and suspense.
Midpoint:
A breakthrough: the thief is identified as Jesse, a former student of the Old Town School who feels abandoned by the folk music community. The stakes escalate when they learn he plans to sell the guitar to an unscrupulous collector by Friday.
Bad Guys Close In:
The group faces setbacks. A lead turns into a dead end, and tensions rise as time runs out. Doubts creep in—can they retrieve the guitar and still make the celebration’s Saturday night show?
All Is Lost:
Jesse sells the guitar to the collector. The group, devastated, fears they’ve failed. Stookey wonders if he’ll ever perform with the guitar again or if this journey was a mistake.
Dark Night of the Soul:
Betty inspires Stookey with a reminder of the guitar’s legacy—it’s not just an object but a symbol of the love and resilience behind the music. This reignites their determination.
Break into Three (Act Three):
The group devises a bold plan to intercept the collector. With help from the folk community, they stage an elaborate musical diversion at the collector’s gallery.
Finale:
The plan works, and the guitar is recovered just in time. Stookey, Bob, Betty, and Lonnie celebrate with the folk community at Chicago’s Old Town School of Music. The Saturday night show is a triumph, culminating in Stookey’s debut of a new song inspired by their adventure.
Closing Image:
Stookey strums the Martin 00-18G on stage, his voice carrying through the hall. Betty, Lonnie, and Bob look on, beaming. The audience rises for a standing ovation, the music once again uniting everyone in a shared moment of joy.
The Song: "Chicago's Melody"
(To the tune of a classic folk melody)
"Through the streets of Chicago, we roamed,
Chasing a dream, far from our home.
With friends by my side, through laughter and strife,
We found the heart of this musical life."
"The old Martin called with a tale to tell,
Of folk music’s magic, where memories dwell.
Through Millenium Park to Navy Pier,
We followed its echo, strong and clear."
"Now here we stand, guitar in hand,
Singing together, a united band.
Through stolen strings and melodies bright,
We found Chicago’s heart tonight."
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