Posted by Octaine on May 13, 2005, 5:40 pm, in reply to "Fags On My Dick (Lets Get This Straight)" Sister Clean And Braced With Out Kits, Treys Ain't Part Of the Cubbord Or Dish// (Wait) over all there isnt anything that stuck out to me..truthfully i cant believe i read it all..and that shit at tha end..yea. i dont know if anyone else will read that..it was a waste of time.. I Kept Gats Like Cellphones, From The Clip To The Waist//
64.12.116.130
Just Checkin On You Young Cats..
At The Age 11 Partyin' Out West, Gettin Lap Dances Rubbin On Tits//
- almost believable..just not really..so..lets try sumthing that we can imagin...
I Spit Diseases More Contagist Then Ah Cough//
U Standin On The Job So, I'mma Hafta Lay You Off//
- second line..aight..but..more than a cough..cough = cold...shit on here posed to be hot. no one gives a #### about a cold...
They Out Starven Like Ham Burgers, Frys But No Cheese//
- wow..you're trying tooo hard...
6/10 not whut i expected..thought things would have raised since i left.
- decent..if it had sumthing to lead it up better...
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