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~*~Aight, since I'm in the mood, I think this one should be good~*~
[Nicole and Liana at the pool]
Liana: This weather is almost perfect. It’s not too cold but not too hot. We got us a nice breeze goin…
Nicole: Yeah, it’s pretty nice…*shuts her eyes and thinks about Kareem* I can’t believe he did me that way. He shoulda dumped her and went with me instead. But no…oh well. That’s his loss.
*Eddie walks out to the girls*
Eddie: Um, Nicole, can I talk to you for a minute?
Nicole: What is it? *rolls over and looks at him through her sunglasses*
Eddie: I think that we should talk alone…
Nicole *gets up and follows him to the gym*: What is it?
Eddie: I think that you should give Kareem another chance.
Nicole: Now why in the hell would I do something like that? After the way he did me? No, if he wants another chance, he should come back to me. I don’t want him anymore, remember?
Eddie: I don’t believe that, Nicole…
Nicole: Nigga, you can believe whatever you want to believe. I really don’t care. I don’t want him anymore after what he’s done…
Eddie: You’re gonna let something like this get in the way of your friendship? Y’all been friends for like 3 years. This ain’t worth it and you know it.
Nicole: I can’t believe you’re taking his side on this. Who knew you first? Me, right? Oh but then again, I forgot that we have to sell out our home girls but we gotta stick up for the next nigga. My bad.
Eddie: It’s not even that serious, and you know it. I’m only telling you this because it’s the truth.
Nicole: If he wants to say something to me, he knows where to find me *walks back to Liana*. Look, let’s leave. Ima go to the beach and get some air.
Liana: Aight. I was getting sleepy anyhow. Ima go back to your place and crash.
Nicole: Ok, whatever. Ima get a ride there from my homeboy.
Liana: Just as long as I get some sleep. I’m mad tired.
Nicole: I got you taken care of.
Joe *in the kitchen with Porcha*: What should I say to your sister?
Porcha: Say whatever you want to say. I mean, the only thing you can do is tell her how you feel. Then it’s left up to her after that. But there’s something you’re not telling me.
Joe: Oh, you’re talking about Tangie?
Porcha: Yeah, what’s the deal with her?
Joe: I don’t know. She’s been mad irritating lately. I had to break up with her. I told her if she kept trippin, I’d dump her. After the party, I took her home and she went to trippin because she saw me lookin at Carmen and Nicole. I’ve always loved Carmen. I hope and pray that she’ll take me into her life…
*Carmen walks downstairs into the kitchen*
Carmen: Oh, hi Joe. I never heard you come in…how you doing?
Joe: Fine. I need to talk to you…
Carmen: Ok. What’s up?
Joe: Well, I believe we’re supposed to be together *stumbles through his words a bit but regains composure* Carmen, I love you…I’ve always loved you…I need you…
Carmen: Oh, Joe…I love you too…
Carmen: Yeah, but…I’m in love with my boyfriend, Xavier. I’m sorry…
Joe *completely crushed* Ok… *his cell phone rings* What is it Tangie?
Tangie: We have a problem?
Joe: What do you mean, WE? I don’t go with you anymore…
Tangie: Well, you’re gonna have to become real close with me again…
Joe: What the hell are you talking about?
Tangie: I’m pregnant, Joe…
Joe *in complete shock*: WHAT?!
Tangie: Yeah. I took a test today. I’m 6 weeks pregnant…
Joe: I’ll be over there in a minute. *hung up the phone*
Porcha: What is it?
Joe: Tangie is 6 weeks pregnant…
Carmen: Are you serious?! Is it yours?
Joe: I don’t know. It should be. If not, I’m out.
Porcha: She might be tryin to run some game to get you back, Joe. You need to be careful.
*He leaves to go to Tangie’s house*
[Nicole at the apartment]
Nicole: Look, if you need me, call me. But otherwise, I shall be home later.
Liana: I’ll only call if it’s an emergency. I know you need some time alone to clear your head.
Nicole: Thank you. I’ll see you when I get back…
Liana: Look, you be careful. I know how you get when you’re mad. Don’t do anything stupid.
Nicole: Don’t sweat me. I’ll be careful. *walks outside to her home boy, Junior who had a new black Kawasaki Ninja sitting out in the parking lot waiting for Nicole to ride* Damn, this is nice, Junior.
Junior: No problem. I told you I would hook you up for your 21st.
Nicole: I appreciate this more than you know.
Junior: No problem. Happy 21st.
Nicole: Thank you. *gets on the bike and rides to the beach. She gets there and parks the bike. She walks onto the sand with her towel and sits down to watch the sunset*
*The waves crashed against the rocks in the distance. The birds flew into the sunset. The setting was so peaceful. Nicole watched the lovers walk across the sand, hand in hand. She watched them and a tear fell from her eyes. She wished Kareem was there with her. It hit her hard when she played back the night she kicked him out. That was the most painful thing she had to do. She loved Kareem but he didnÂ’t feel the same way. That’s what hurt the most.*
MV: Can we talk please?
Nicole *wiping the tears away*: What do you want, Kareem? *she didn’t even look at him*
Kareem: Look, I wanted to know if we could start over? *sits down on the sand with her* I brought you something. *pulls out a single white rose from behind his back* This is for you and I thought that you might need this too. *pulls out 2 mugs and a canteen full of hot chocolate*
Nicole: What’s the rose for?
Kareem: I knew it was your favorite, and the hot chocolate is because it’s mad cold out here. I can’t believe you’re here, let alone by yourself.
Nicole: I needed some time to myself…
Kareem: Me and Shayla broke up…
Nicole *not really surprised*: Why?
Kareem: She was cheating on me with Tyrell.
Nicole: I’m sorry…
Kareem: Well, it’s not your fault. I shoulda listened to you and everyone else.
Nicole: I coulda told you that. Nobody ever listens to me because I know what I’m talking about.
Kareem: I was hoping that we could start over…
Nicole: HELL NO! Not after what’s happened! Are you kidding?! *gets up and begins to leave* I’m out!
Kareem: No, you can’t walk away from me this time!
Nicole: Watch me! *gets on the bike and starts it* I’m not going through this shit again, Kareem! Never again! *skids off*
Kareem: I love you, Nicole…
*Just as Nicole was going to turn the corner, a car hit her from behind. She went flying off the bike about 3 feet away from the intersection. Kareem heard the crash and darted to the scene of the crime. She had been hit by a drunk driver. She laid there in her own blood. Her breathing was slow and her vision was blurred. He took her helmet off and looked at her and burst into tears*
Kareem: NO!!! You can’t die on me, Nicole.
Nicole: What are you crying for? *frowns a bit* What’s wrong?
Kareem: We gotta get you to a hospital…
*The driver got out of the car and looked at Nicole laying there and was speechless*
*Kareem got out his cell phone and called 911. They got there about 5 minutes later and rushed her to the hospital. The driver was arrested and taken to prison for man slaughter.*
[Kareem at the hospital with Liana]
*Kareem paced around the room for almost 2 hours while Liana was on the phone with Venessa trying to explain what happened. The doctor finally came out and gave him the news*
Kareem: Well, how is she? *holding Liana*
Doctor *shook his head*: She didn’t make i'm…I’m sorry…
*Liana fell to the floor and burst into tears. Kareem tried to be strong and not cry but it hit him hard too. He eventually broke down and cried like a baby*
*They buried her body 3 days later…
~*~The moral of the storee is if you love someone with all your heart, don’t let anything stand in your way of telling them. Don’t ever wait to tell someone you love them because it might be too late…~*~
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